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Forever, your little weed by ~BattousaiGrl:iconBattousaiGrl:



I have always been there,
waiting patiently, silently wanting to be known,
to be considered as something precious to you.

Always in the background,
I painfully watched in muted silence
as you embraced others in your hands
and nonchalantly ignored me on a daily basis.

From there, I started standing taller,
sprouting everywhere within your vision,
anxiously hoping that one day
you would notice me and love and adore me
like you did with all the others.

That was until one day, you saw her
standing out of the crowd like no other.
That sly devilish red beauty--enchanting you
with her majestic prettiness as her thorns
dig into you, capturing your mind in her grasp,
never letting you go.

It was then I realized--you will never
notice plain little ol’ me,
not as long as that devilish beauty has you.  
With that in mind, I tried my hardest to pull
away--to separate you from myself.

But for some reason, I couldn’t
bear to tear myself from you.
I treasure you too much to cast away,
no matter if you see me or not.

And so I will stand as tall as I can,
silently and agonizingly by your side,
growing everywhere, no matter unwanted or ignored,
in the background with the shadows of your mind
as your forever, valueless and ignored, little weed.
©2008-2009 ~BattousaiGrl
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Author's Comments

Hey! This is just a random update, considering I liked my poem & my writing teacher liked it too.

And considering how bad I feel for not writing anything much in the past.........................many months (years?), I'm posting this to kind of make myself feel a little better XP.

I hope the people who read this enjoy it like I do (my masterpiece~~~!!!!! :D).

if you dont, plz dont comment then.

thx a bunch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD!

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:iconnorthern-lights-sky:
Kim... writes... POETRY!? cool

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:iconbattousaigrl:
cool as in the poem is good
or cool as in im actually writing poetry????? o.o?
.....& watz so weird 'bout me writing poetry, hmmmmmm???
:iconnorthern-lights-sky:
Both.

Who said it was weird? I'm allowed to be surprised.

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:iconbattousaigrl:
.....but.....
.....watz so surprising
'bout me writing a form of
poetry?????? o.o?
:iconxihuanbaozi:
i love it
it's very moving =]
good job you deserve yoour candy corn when you get home
hey one more week right?

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live your life to the fullest
live and love yourself
postive output = positive imput =]
:iconnorthern-lights-sky:
...Kim, you're thinking about this waaaay too much. It's just that you've never posted any poetry on dev, so it's new.

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:iconbattousaigrl:
yay! :D
im glad u luv it!
i cant wait 4 the candy corn!
CANDY CORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRN!!!!!!
& no, itz actually 1 week & 5 days from 2day (11/14/08).
until then!
thx 4 luving my 1st poem online!!!!!!! :D
:iconbattousaigrl:
oh........ok. i'll think less now. =]
& yea--my 1st poem online.
im so happy that ppl r liking my 1st poem online! :D
may b i'll post some other poems online later in the future...???
naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah.
i dont think i'll b able 2 think up another poem as great as this one later.
XP!
anyway, thx 4 liking it--& replying my many many many comments 2 ur comments! =]
:iconnorthern-lights-sky:
You bet = ]

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